Sunday, September 29, 2013

We finished As You Like It and we are starting Twelfth Night!

We finished As You Like It and we are starting Twelfth Night!

Just a reminder about future dates for Twelfth Night.

M, 9/30 – Problems in Act I, Twelfth Night.

Homework:

 

T, 10/1 – Act I, Twelfth Night.

Homework: Read ABGW, pp.  52 – 57. Writing persuades through angle of vision. Due, W, 10/2.

 

W, 10/2 – Analyzing Angle of Vision. Discuss Problem/Solution Essay. First Draft, Due, F, 11/8. Final Draft, Due, 11/14.

Homework: Read ABGW, pp. 58. Due, TH, 10/3.

 

TH, 10/3 – Discuss Logos, Ethos and Pathos.

Homework: Read Act II, Twelfth Night. Due, M, 10/7.

 

F (A) 10/4 – No class

 

M, 10/7 – Act II, Twelfth Night

Homework:  Read Act III, Twelfth Night. Due, T, 10/8.

 

T, 10/8 – Act III, Twelfth Night

Homework: Read ABGW, pp. 67 – 69.

 

W, 10/9 – Different writing styles and factors that affect style, pp.  68.

 

FALL BREAK

 

T, 10/15 – Act IV, Twelfth Night – Themes of Twelfth Night

Homework: Read Act V, Twelfth Night; Work on 5 Quotation Discussions from Twelfth Night. Due TH 10/17.

 

W, 10/16 – Act V, Twelfth Night – Themes of Twelfth Night.

Homework:  Type-up  5 Quotation Discussions from Twelfth Night. Due TH 10/17.

 

TH, 10/17 – Essay Quiz on Twelfth Night. 5 Quotations from Twelfth Night DUE. (Can be used for quiz) – END OF TERM

Homework:  .Read ABGW, pp. 408-411 on Finding a Proposal issue.

Saturday, September 14, 2013

How to cite Shakespeare




How to Cite Shakespeare: MLA Format

 

The following is taken from the following website:


 

If you have further questions, also look at:


 

 

§  Italicize the titles of plays:

Richard III or Othello.

§  Cite line and page numbers up to 101 like this: 34-37; above 100, you repeat only the last two figures: 211-12 (but of course, 397-405 and 96-109). Use arabic numerals rather than roman numerals for citations of acts, scenes, and line numbers:

Twelfth Night (1.5.268-76).

§  Always use arabic numerals to refer to acts and scenes:

In 3.1, Hamlet delivers his most famous soliloquy.

(Do NOT say: In Act III, scene i, Hamlet delivers his most famous soliloquy.)

§  Periods and commas ALWAYS go inside quotation marks:

“Periods and commas,” says Dr. Womack, “ALWAYS go inside quotation marks.”

§  If a prose quotation runs four lines or less, put it in quotation marks and incorporate it in the text:

The immensely obese Falstaff tells the Prince: “When I was about thy years, Hal, I was not an eagle’s talon in the waist; I could have crept into any alderman’s thumb ring” (2.4.325-27).

§  If a prose quotation runs to more than four lines, set it off from your text by beginning a new line, indenting one inch from the left margin, and type it double-spaced, without adding quotation marks. A colon generally introduces an indented quotation.

In Much Ado About Nothing, Benedick reflects on what he has overheard Don Pedro, Leonato, and Claudio say:

This can be no trick. The conference was sadly borne. They have the truth of this from Hero. They seem to pity the lady. It seems her affections have their full bent. Love me? Why, it must be requited. I hear how I am censured. They say I will bear myself proudly if I perceive the love come from her; they say too that she will rather die than give any sign of affection. (2.3.217-24)

§  If you quote all or part of a single line of verse, put it in quotation marks within your text:

Berowne’s pyrotechnic line “Light, seeking light, doth light of light beguile” is a text-book example of antanaclasis (1.1.77).

§  You may also incorporate two or three lines in the same way, using a slash with a space on each side ( / ) to separate them:

Claudius alludes to the story of Cain and Abel when he describes his crime: “It hath the primal eldest curse upon’t, / A brother’s murder” (3.3.37-38).

§  Verse quotations of more than three lines should begin on a new line. Indent each line one inch from the left margin and double-space between lines, adding no quotation marks that do not appear in the original. If the quotation starts in the middle of a line of verse, reproduce it that way, do not shift it to the left margin:

Jaques begins his famous speech by comparing the world to a theater:

                                        All the world’s a stage
And all the men and women merely players:
They have their exits and their entrances;
And one man in his time plays many parts,
His acts being seven ages. (2.7.138-42)

He then proceeds to enumerate and analyze these ages.

§  If you quote dialogue between two or more characters in a play, set the quotation off from your text. Begin each part of the dialogue with the appropriate character’s name indented one inch from the left margin and written in all capital letters. Follow the name with a period, and start the quotation. Indent all subsequent lines in the character’s speech an additional quarter inch. When the dialogue shifts to another character, start a new line indented one inch from the left margin. Maintain this pattern throughout the entire quotation.

A short time later, Lear’s daughters try to dismiss all of their father’s servants:

GONERIL.                         Hear me, my lord.
     What need you five-and-twenty, ten, or five
     To follow in a house where twice so many
     Have command to tend you?
REGAN.                                   What need one?
LEAR. O, reason not the need! (2.4.254-58)

 

 

Punctuation Rules

Punctuation Rules

¨  Comma Examples
The lengthy, detailed, mind-numbing research paper was finished after an all-night session.
¨  Comma
¨  Divides all items in a series
ú  Including the last two items, even if they are separated by “and”
¨  Comma Examples
For the ward dinner, we’ll have mystery meat, mixed vegetables, green Jell-O with shredded carrots, and potatoes and gravy.
¨  Comma
¨  Divides nonessential, or interrupting, elements from the essential sentence elements
¨  Comma Examples
Mad cow disease, the cause of which is unknown, decimated the British beef industry.
¨  Comma Examples
Mad cow disease, the cause of which is unknown, decimated the British beef industry.
¨  Comma
¨  Sets off a direct quotation, if the material quoted forms an independent clause
¨  Comma Examples
The bookstore clerk said, “We didn’t order enough copies of the textbook.”
The bookstore clerk said that they “did not order enough books.”
The bookstore clerk said that they failed to order sufficient textbooks.
¨  Comma
¨  Is used in dates before and after the year, when the format is month, day, year.
¡  Is not used with partial dates or with other date formats (e.g., day, month, year)
¨  Comma Examples
I will send you the material on July 8, 2011, which is three days before you need it.
I will send you the material on 8 July 2011, which is three days before you need it.
I will send you the material on 7/8/2011, which is three days before you need it.
Which format do you use – 7/8/2011 or 8/7/2011?
                Best to avoid this format and its confusion.
¨  Comma
¨  Provides clarification when / where needed
¨  Comma
¨  Provides clarification when / where needed
¨  Semicolon
¨  Textbook calls it a “super comma”
¡  Only one of its functions
¨  Semicolon
¡  Divides two independent clauses without a conjunction
   The clauses must be closely related
¨  Semicolon Examples
Last spring was the warmest in 30 years; this spring was the coldest.
Last spring was the warmest in 30 years; my nose is too long.
¨  Semicolon
       Precedes a conjunctive adverb between two clauses
   Conjunctive adverbs include therefore, thus, however, nonetheless, and some others
¨  Semicolon Examples
Last spring was the warmest in 30 years; however, this spring was the coldest.
Our “Swimwear in January” sale, however, sold out in two days.
¨  Semicolon
¨  Divides items in a parallel series where there are internal commas
¨  Semicolon
¨  Divides the terms i.e. and e.g. from preceding independent clauses
¡  i.e. = “that is,” from the Latin id est.
¡  e.g. = “for example,” from the Latin exempli gratia
¨  Semicolon Examples
There is a high expense limit for senior executives; i.e., vice presidents and the CEO.
There is a much lower expense limit for real people; e.g., mail room workers and customer service reps.
¨  Semicolon
¨  Semicolons are never used to introduce lists
¨  Semicolons are never used in letter salutations
¨  Semicolon
¨  Semicolons are never used to introduce lists
¨  Semicolons are never used in letter salutations
¨  Colon
¨  Introduces items that complete a sentence, when preceded by an independent clause
¨  Colon Example
We created special parking spaces for these essential people: the receptionists, the salesperson of the month, and the printer repair person.
¨  Bad Colon Example
We created special parking spaces for: the receptionists, the salesperson of the month, and the copier repairman.
¨  Colon
¨  Introduces items in a bulleted or numbered list
¡  Preceding independent clause is not needed here
¨  Colon Example
We exceeded our sales goals by:
¨  Visiting each customer twice a week
¨  Offering deep discounts for quantity purchases
¨  Bringing Krispy Kreme doughnuts
¨  Colon
¨  Is always used for the salutation line in a business letter
¡  Commas may be used for personal letters
¨  Dash
¨  Not a hyphen – it’s longer
ú  Hyphen:                               -
ú  “N” dash:                            
ú  “M” dash:                           
¨  The “n” dash is used more than the “m” dash
¨  Dash
¨  Sets off sentence interrupters or introductory phrases
¡  The “m” dash is the traditional choice here.
¡  No spaces are used before/after the “m” dash.
¡  The “n” dash with before/after spaces is now used more frequently.
¨  Is used in date ranges
¡  The “n’ dash is the traditional choice here.
¡  No spaces are used before/after the dash.
¡  The hyphen is sometimes used but is not preferred.
¨  Dash Example
He implied – though he didn’t actually say it – that we had won the sweepstakes.
Plan to come next Tuesday – there will be refreshments.
He wrote his best novels from 1948–1971.
¨  Hyphen
¨  Connects prefixes and base words
¡  When the prefix ends with the same letter that begins the base word
ú  Anti-inflammatory
ú  Shell-like
¡  When the prefix and base word might be confused with another word
ú  Re-form vs. reform
¨  Hyphen
¨  Connects prefixes and base words
¡  When the prefix is “self-”
ú  Self-serving, self-absorbed
ú  Not selfish (“ish” is not a word)
¡  When the word might otherwise be mispronounced
ú  Co-worker, not coworker
¡  When the base word is capitalized
ú  Anti-American
¡  When the base word is a number
ú  Pre-1930 Ford Model T
¨  Hyphen
¨  Used to join compound adjectives
¡  Well-rounded intellect
¡  Bell-bottom trousers
¡  Ill-fitting toupee
¡  Small-business managers
¡  Quickly written paper (no hyphen)
ú  “ly” words don’t need hyphens
¨  Not used when adjectives follow nouns
¡  That was a 12-year-old complaint.
¡  That complaint was 12 years old.
¡  Hyphen
¨  Not used for these prefixes, unless there is a chance of confusion:
¡  Pre
¡  Re
¡  Sub
¡  Semi
¡  Parentheses
¨  Set off incidental comments
¨  Introduce abbreviations for longer terms
¨  Enclose enumerations
¨  Parentheses Example
Their alley-oop play (a pass for a dunk) had more “alley” than “oop.”
The Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) is widely considered an oxymoron.
You need to get (a) the text, (b) the Harvard case, and (c) blank paper.
¨  Quotation Marks
¨  Used for direct quotations
¡  Not used for paraphrases or inexact quotations
¡  Punctuation goes inside the closing quotation mark.
¨  Also used sometimes to indicate that a phrase is inexact
¡  Never used to provide emphasis
¨  Quotation Marks Example
He said, “Okay, I’ll sign the contract.”
He said that he will perform the work.
Laundry detergents are “new and improved” every year.
We want to see the “big” picture so we can “synergize” our efforts. (Good example of bad business writing.)
¨  Ellipsis Marks
¨  Indicates an omission in a quotation, or a pause in informal writing
¡  Must not be used to change the essential meaning of the quotation
¨  Usage:
¡  Is used with a space before and after the ellipsis
¡  At the end of a sentence or phrase, is used with the period or comma, with no extra space
¨  Ellipsis Examples
Our goal is to be, among many other things, the Wal-mart of luxury car dealers.
¨  Ellipsis Examples
Our goal is to be … the Wal-mart of luxury car dealers.
¨  Ellipsis Examples
If we want to build a new 200,000-square-foot building, we will have to increase sales by 200 percent.
¨  Ellipsis Examples
If we want to build …, we will have to increase sales by 200 percent.
¨  Ellipsis Examples
The snowstorm produced a series of short circuits that snowballed into a statewide power outage that took over a week to repair.
¨  Ellipsis Examples
The snowstorm produced a series of short circuits that  snowballed….
¨  Ellipsis Examples
The “Adulterous Bible” – 1631
¨  Exclamation Point
¨  Use it sparingly!
¡  One per document is usually enough; otherwise, its impact is diluted!
ú  If everything sentence has an exclamation point, then the impact is the same as if no sentence had one!
ú  Never use more than one to end a sentence!!!!!
¡  Try to go a whole week without using one!